speech modify 1
The attachment is the speech I have, but I feel like it is not closely related to my topic.
So, the only thing you need to do is modifying, rewording, and doing some grammar check. And change some content to introduction of Buddhism. with one or two specific example (need to be interesting). You need to shift the theme more about buddhism, the language needs to be formal but easy to understand. please provide sources.
Please control the whole speech to be between 700 to 850 words. ( I’ve written 800 words, you may delete some contents)